The next project after our Hiki No project was to create a poem by ourself. My poem was on being supported by family and friends. Visuals make an impact because if you just here the voice you can't make a picture out of what they are saying. I chose being supported because it is great and that if you make mistakes you have people to be there to help you back up once made that mistake because we aren't perfect. Visuals also help create an impact because the voice is just to help make you want to listen.
Special effects help affect the overall meaning because if you have a sad or depressed poem you can add shadows to make it feel darker. If you have a happy jumpy poem you can sparkles and happy stuff to enlighten your poem.I didn't really use many effects because I just started this program this year but I know next year my poem will be way better and have a lot more effects and transitions. I think that because of effects and transitions our poems can be really good but still have a few flaws.I know that because of effects you can have moods and tones in your poem.
So I am not very happy with how it turned out because I messed up at the beginning and the end.I could make it better by writing something instead of just leaving it there. I could also fix it by putting in a picture a the end so you don't see a building. I also should have made one of the descriptions shorter so it didn't mess up the other part. I know that because I didn't fix this my grade might go down and I guess that what my teachers told me is true. They told me " What you get is what you EARNED " I guess at first I didn't this but now I totally get and respect it.
I love some of your pictures!
ReplyDeleteSome if your visuals weren't that great, you had a horizontal video.
I'm glad you love your family.
I liked your pics
ReplyDeleteYou were to close to you mic and you video got cut off
I liked your topic about yu family and friends
great topic
ReplyDeletevertical video syndrome
GREAT b-roll
I like the titles
ReplyDeleteUnclear topic
Good balance of photos, video and effects
I like all of your broll
ReplyDeleteone photo did not fill the whole screan
I also liked the way you said your poem
I like the shots
ReplyDeleteIn the end you were cut off
I like the effects
nice voice overs
ReplyDeletegot cut off at the end
I like the poem writing
I liked the photos you got with your friends
ReplyDeleteAt the end your voice over was cut off
The videos were quite nice
Great Pictures of your family.
ReplyDeleteMuffled voice.
Great work.
Im a sucker for the star effect, Good title effect
ReplyDeleteI see words overlapping try to fix and avoid that, A Lot of background noise, And low quality videos.
The pictures of your b-roll is very very good.
Good shots
ReplyDeleteYour voice-overs got cut off
Get more b-roll
Nice content. I liked how you said how you help around the house.
ReplyDeleteOne of the words said "Title..." something needed to be transformed.
I also how you said WHO helps you out and how.
•I liked the topic
ReplyDelete•The ending got cut off
•I liked the mixture b-roll
The topic is interesting family is good
ReplyDeleteSometimes it sounds like a windstorm
Family is good thing
1. I like the writing piece
ReplyDelete2. One title isn't filled out with the right words
3. I like the parts when your dad helps you and stuff
Your photos were really cool and creative
ReplyDeleteThe ending cut out way to early
Awesome audio as well
nice transitions
ReplyDeletethe titles were a little whack and use pam
the videos were really nice
I liked the differnet b-roll that you had it was interesting to look at and kinda funny inm a GOOD way.
ReplyDeleteOne thing to do better is tto not cut off the reciting because it cuted off at the end of you reciting your poem
I liked how you recited your poem
your poem was well written
ReplyDeletethere was some unnecessary text layovers and your poem got cut off
I like your video of how your dad supports you to get in shape
I like the transition between the clips.
ReplyDeleteYou need pad at the end of your audio.
I like your poem.
~I really liked the B-roll shots they were very creative
ReplyDelete~the ending was cut off and it didn't sound very good so ad some padding
~The composition techniques were spot on
I liked how you put that pictures of you and your family in the golf cart.
ReplyDeleteThe ending was cut off.
I liked the picture of you in your soccer uniform.
Really great shots!
ReplyDeleteYou had a vertical video, and your audio needed padding.
Great message!
It was really well written
ReplyDeletethere could be more a-roll and b-roll
and it was great your photos
Nice B-roll of soccer
ReplyDeleteIt got cut off
Nice A-roll
I really like the different shots of you and your family
ReplyDeletethe horizon line was slanted
i really like your writing